Do you eat too many sweets?

All around the world, millions of children get diabetes from eating too many sweets.

Children should stop eating too many sweets because it will cause diabetes. Diabetes can cause your eyes and kidney to slow down. It can slow down your blood circulation. If you eat too many sweets you can become overweight.

  Eating too many sweets will cause your teeth to become rotten. It can cause cavities between our teeth. Bacteria are attracted to sugar so it can cause your teeth to rot. If you eat too many candies,  your teeth might fall out.

    Sweets gives children bad energy. Bad energy is energy that makes children hyper for a short period of time and then they will have low energy again. They lose their focus and become more easily distracted. However, there are natural sugar that is good for children like the sucrose from apples, bananas and other.

Eating too many sweets is bad because it may cause their teeth to rot, have diabetes or bad energy that may lead their bodies to shut down.

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