Are you in one of the Manaiakalani schools?

We are learning to write a description.
I know I can do this when I write a brainstorm and a script to describe the 2015 Manaiakalani film festival.
Transcript:
On the 11th of November 2015, I went to Hoyts Sylvia Park in Mrs Dines’ car to represent my class Room 7 from St Patrick’s school in the Manaiakalani film festival. We watched different short movies that other schools have made like Tamaki primary, Glen Innes school, St Patrick's, Glenbrae, Panmure bridge, Stonefields.