Hi Cheska,i'm Phoenix from St Patrick's school too, but from Greymouth. You have wrote a great acrostic poem,I loved it. The thing that really stood out was the coloured backgrounds that were in it. Maybe next time you could change the colour of the writing because you couldn't really see what you had written. Well done :)
Hi Cheska,i'm Phoenix from St Patrick's school too, but from Greymouth.
ReplyDeleteYou have wrote a great acrostic poem,I loved it. The thing that really stood out was the coloured backgrounds that were in it. Maybe next time you could change the colour of the writing because you couldn't really see what you had written.
Well done :)
Kia ora Phoenix,
DeleteThank you for the tips about my learning display, I will keep it in mind for future work.
Thank you Reagan for the tips.
ReplyDeleteSincerely, Cheska