Children should stop eating too much sweets.
2. Are you going to be against this idea?
Yes because sweets are bad for children.
3. Who are you aiming to persuade?
Children and parents.
4. Write a sentence to express your opinion on this topic.
Children should stop eating sweets because it will rot your teeth.
My arguments:
1. Children should stop eating sweets because it will cause diabetes.
Diabetes can cause your eyes and children's kidneys to slow down.
It can slowdown children's blood circulation.
If children eat a lot of sweets you can get fat.
It can cause cavities in between your teeth.
Bacteria are attracted to sugar so it will cause your teeth to rot.
Sweets can cause your teeth from falling off.
3. Sweets are bad for you because it gives children bad energy.
Children go hyper for 15 minutes and then you will have low energy again.
Children will not listen to anyone.
Children will be distracted because of sweets.
We are learning to understand and plan a persuasive piece of writing.
I know I can do this when I plan a persuasive writing about children not eating sweets.
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