Splish, splash, splish, splash!

On a hot sunny day, my family and I went to the pools to have some family time together.

Once we arrived there my brother and I raced to the automatic door and we were like cheetahs chasing their meal. Once my dad paid for our fee I quickly changed as quick as a click of a button and jumped into the pool.

Then all of a sudden I heard someone call out my name, I looked up and saw that it was Yssabelle, We were so surprised to see each other. However, soon they had to go because her friend was getting cold.

After that, I went back to play with my two brothers so that I won’t get bored swimming alone. When I saw my brother Ezekiel playing in the water and trying to swim with my uncle holding him, I was really surprised because it was his first time swimming. I jumped into the pool and swam really fast to my brothers.

While I was playing with my brother Eldrich. Ezekiel Splashed water on my face and it was really funny because some of the water splashed on his face as well and he made a cute smile with his eyes. After that, Eldrich suggested that we play tag so I said, “Yes!”

Once the game started, I quickly ran to the furthest corner and hid under the water from my dad and my brother. I heard footsteps coming toward me and it was my dad, he quickly tagged me. So I quickly jiggled up and got ready to tag my dad back by practising my freestyle arms. When it was time to tag them I quietly snuck up to them and tagged my dad without him noticing me. Then I went in front of him and I said, “Haha you lose. ”After that, we had to go because we had to pick my mum up from work.

I had an extraordinary time with my family because I don’t get to play with them that often Next time, I hope my mum comes and swims with us as well.

We are learning to use understand descriptive language.
I know I can do this when I use appropriate verbs, adverbs and similes to describe my holiday.

I will never regret this day!

During the holiday, my friend invited me to go rainbows end with them to have a little get together because we haven’t seen each other for a while.

Once we got there, Jane, Oshea, her friends and away ran out of the car and raced to the counter to pay our entrance fee. I was really shocked because Oshea’s dad had to pay $306 dollars (that’s a lot of money)! I said thank you to Oshea’s dad for paying our entrance fee.

As soon as we stepped inside, we all ran to the coffins. We laid down and closed our eyes (it smelt like someone farted in the coffin, ew)! Then Oshea, Jane and I ran to the Fare fall as fast as a lightning bolt striking Earth because we were so excited about trying it out.

When it was going up, I felt really scared because I haven’t tried it before. Woosh! It went down and I tried to scream but I couldn’t because it was as if my throat was closed off. Finally it was over, I kissed the ground and screamed out, “That was awesome.”

The next ride that we went on was called the Invader. It was really awesome because it spun round and round and went in loops at the same time. When we finally got off the Invader my legs felt like spaghetti. After that, we went to another ride called the Power surge, spun all of us around around wildly.

I was really scared when I hopped on the seats of the Power surge and I thought that I might vomit when I’m upside down. When it was turning us around I was screaming and crying at the same time because it was spinning so fast. Sadly Oshea’s dad called us for to head home because it was getting late.

I felt really happy because I finally got to experience the rides that haven’t been on at Rainbow’s End. Next time,I hope I won’t scream when I’m riding the Power surge.

We are learning to use appropriate language features.

I know I can do this when I use verbs, adverbs, similes and adjectives to describe my writing.