Step away from sweets!

1. What's your topic?

Children should stop eating too much sweets.

2. Are you going to be against this idea?

Yes because sweets are bad for children.

3. Who are you aiming to persuade?

Children and parents.

4. Write a sentence to express your opinion on this topic.

Children should stop eating sweets because it will rot your teeth.

My arguments:

1. Children should stop eating sweets because it will cause diabetes.

Diabetes can cause your eyes and children's kidneys to slow down.

It can slowdown children's blood circulation.

If children eat a lot of sweets you can get fat.

2. Children should stop eating sweets because they will have rotten teeth.

It can cause cavities in between your teeth. 

Bacteria are attracted to sugar so it will cause your teeth to rot.

Sweets can cause your teeth from falling off.

3. Sweets are bad for you because it gives children bad energy.

Children go hyper for 15 minutes and then you will have low energy again.

Children will not listen to anyone.  

Children will be distracted because of sweets.

We are learning to understand and plan a persuasive piece of writing.

I know I can do this when I plan a persuasive writing about children not eating sweets.

Do you eat too many sweets?

All around the world, millions of children get diabetes from eating too many sweets.

Children should stop eating too many sweets because it will cause diabetes. Diabetes can cause your eyes and kidney to slow down. It can slow down your blood circulation. If you eat too many sweets you can become overweight.

  Eating too many sweets will cause your teeth to become rotten. It can cause cavities between our teeth. Bacteria are attracted to sugar so it can cause your teeth to rot. If you eat too many candies,  your teeth might fall out.

    Sweets gives children bad energy. Bad energy is energy that makes children hyper for a short period of time and then they will have low energy again. They lose their focus and become more easily distracted. However, there are natural sugar that is good for children like the sucrose from apples, bananas and other.

Eating too many sweets is bad because it may cause their teeth to rot, have diabetes or bad energy that may lead their bodies to shut down.

We are learning to use and understand the persuasive writing structure.

I know I can do this when I make a persuasive writing about why children shouldn't eat too many sweets.

Thank you birds and insects!

                                            No more wasps! 
DOC (Department of Conservation) had discovered that wasps are dying in the South Island of New Zealand because a lot of insects and birds are eating them. DOC scientist Eric Edwards detected that all the hives of the wasps had no honey in it. Scientists think that birds and insects eat the wasps to gather for honey, only to discover that there are none.

We are learning to understand the features of a headline.
I know I can do this when I write a headline that grabs people's attention.