Hi Cheska,i'm Phoenix from St Patrick's school too, but from Greymouth. You have wrote a great acrostic poem,I loved it. The thing that really stood out was the coloured backgrounds that were in it. Maybe next time you could change the colour of the writing because you couldn't really see what you had written. Well done :)
Hi Cheska,i'm Phoenix from St Patrick's school too, but from Greymouth.
ReplyDeleteYou have wrote a great acrostic poem,I loved it. The thing that really stood out was the coloured backgrounds that were in it. Maybe next time you could change the colour of the writing because you couldn't really see what you had written.
Well done :)
Kia ora Phoenix,
DeleteThank you for the tips about my learning display, I will keep it in mind for future work.
Kia Ora Cheska. My name is Reagan and I am in Mamaku Hub.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have made your acrostic into a kind of story. I also really like how you have added in a background so that it stands out.
Next time you could make sure it is clear to read and you could also make sure that the 'P.E.N.C.I.L' all stand out.
Anyway I think that is a great acrostic poem especially because they are quite hard.
From Reagan
Thank you Reagan for the tips.
ReplyDeleteSincerely, Cheska